CAT TIEN
Words Can't Explain :]
The most memorable moment at Cat Tien was at night. My roomates and I had so much fun staying up late till midnight, and then waking up before dawn. Vivi and Darlene were great roomies. Vivi brought everything like perfume, nail polish, all the things a city girl need. Darlene was funny, she took random picturese of me. Some were pretty but most of them were ugly. We had three single beds but we put two beds together, so we could sleep next to ecah other. The left over bed was just a place where we put our clothes for the next day. At night we would put on music to we should sleep better, but it turns out we sang them instead of sleeping. We laughed and joked in our room, so loud that Justine (our neighbor) called and asked us to "Shut Up" and we did. For a little while then we started to get loud again. I miss the endless nights laughing in Cat Tien.
My Grade: 10/12 ♥
My organization is not the best, but i can work on it. I didn't used many words that strike the readers attention. I will certainly work as well. :] ♥
Kristine Nguyen
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I like your entry, it's really easy to visual. I can tell how much u had with Vivi and Darlene.Ur sentence flows pretty well, but u forgot words so the sentence doesn't make sense i.e. " the left over bed was just a place where we put our cloths on for the next." I like your word choice but they're not striking words. Overall it's a great entry <3
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ReplyDeleteI think its awesome!
ReplyDeletemostly because you mentioned me (:
I like the way you described what we did,
and as a native speaker your sentences sure as heck flow nicely :]
i agree with shane,
your word choices arent as, i dont know.. WOW.
its not OUT THERE.
But still you described our fun night wayyy better than i would've. you have SO much personality ♥
i'd give you an 10.5/12 ♥
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